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Exercises for a writing journal; writing out numbers or using numerals

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By Brandi Reissenweber
Published: November 16, 2010
Brandi Reissenweber
Brandi Reissenweber
Q: I’d like to keep a journal, but I never know what to write in one. How do I start?

A: Perhaps Philip Lopate stated it best in his foreword to Writers and Their Notebooks: “No one can expect to write well who would not first take the risk of writing badly. The writer’s notebook is a safe place for such experiments to be undertaken.” Those blank pages are an opportunity to take risks and practice translating experience and emotion onto the page.

If you have an idea of what you’d like to write, but you balk when you sit down to actually do it, the writer’s journal might help. Approach the story or poem as an experiment; you might feel less pressure. You may also find writing exercises helpful. Here are a few to get you started:

• Choose a favorite book. Close your eyes, open the book and put your finger on the page. Begin a scene or a poem that begins with that sentence or phrase.

• Make a list of objects you associate with yourself. Jot down as many as possible. Choose one or several and begin writing on that topic. This might take the form of a poem or a personal essay. You could even do this for a fictional character instead of yourself and see where it leads you.

• Describe a place you know well. Use sensory and specific detail to bring it to life. Add a character who has never been there before. What happens? For nonfiction, this character might be you the first time you discovered this place.

• Write from the perspective of a machine, a seasoning or a body of water. Be specific. What would a robot notice? What would paprika want? How would a puddle behave?

• Finally, here’s an exercise that has so many variables, it can keep you busy for a long time. Divide a stack of note cards into three piles. The more cards you have, the more combinations you can create. For one pile, write a character trait on each card: enjoys snowboarding, generous, unusually tall. For the second pile, write a setting on each card: dentist’s office, meadow, haunted house. For the third pile, write an action on each card: dismantled the holiday decorations, tossed the note in the lake, ate a four-leaf clover. Shuffle each pile separately. For fiction, pick one card from each pile so you have a character, setting and action. Write a scene that includes all three. Perhaps the unusually tall character throws a note in the lake before going to the haunted house. Or the generous character is in the dentist’s office when she decides to eat the four-leaf clover. Explore character motivation and how the three elements—character, setting and action—influence one another. For nonfiction or poetry, choose one card from two of the piles and write an essay or poem that draws a personal connection between them. You may have to choose more than one pair to hit on a combination that works, but don’t give up too easy. Part of the fun of this exercise is finding unexpected connections.

Writing exercises are a great way to practice and grow, so use them as a springboard for journaling. You may also find that the process of regular writing invites ideas. Follow what intrigues you.

Q: Should I write out numbers or use numerals?

A:
Different style guides have different recommendations. APA style, for example, suggests using numerals for most numbers above ten. If you’re writing a nonfiction book in the field of social or behavioral sciences, you’ll want to follow that style guide.

In literature, you’re bound to see numbers as words more often than numerals. Many publications in this field use the MLA style guide, which suggests spelling out any number that can be written in one or two words: thirty-five, seventeen, eight. Don’t start a sentence with a numeral. Either rephrase the sentence or spell out the number.

Always check the style manual in your discipline when making these decisions. You may even find a particular publication has its own style quirks when it comes to numbers. Make an informed choice, but be open to possibilities when it comes time to publish.

Brandi Reissenweber teaches fiction writing and reading fiction at Gotham Writers' Workshop and authored the chapter on characterization in Gotham's Writing Fiction: The Practical Guide. Her work has been published in numerous journals, including Phoebe, North Dakota Quarterly and Rattapallax. She was a James C. McCreight Fiction Fellow at the Wisconsin Institute for Creative Writing and has taught fiction at New York University, University of Wisconsin and University of Chicago. Currently, she is a visiting professor at Illinois Wesleyan University.

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KATHRYN HILL from OREGON said:
I haven't written any fiction for such a long time! I think that using these exercises will help me to get back into the feel of it again. I have the habit of buying journals and then not writing in them, so I now possess many journals ready for the pen. Now all I need is the discipline to get my mind turned on and my body settled in for actual writing sessions. Wish me luck!
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MARGUERIT ZANGRILLO from NEW YORK said:
I enjoy writing about something I'm not familiar with, since researching the topic is very exciting and refreshing. I am presently interested in writing short stories dealing with crime and police work,
MARGUERIT ZANGRILLO from NEW YORK said:
I enjoy writing about a subject of which I know nothing about because researching opens up a new world to me. It is a wonderful learning experience. I started by writing children's stories but my writing has evolved into writing crime short stories - revealing my darker side!!
JAN MURRAY from AUSTRALIA (NSW) said:
For a writer, I'm a spasmodic (read: slack) journal keeper but one can be too diligent and miss the prize, no? Life is going on around us and that's where the real stories are being recorded. For instance, the other day I was sitting in a coffee shop just taking a break from my desk....in no mood to write...in my journal or anywhere else. A small cameo I witnessed on that occasion is now tucked away and waiting to be used: a well-dressed middle-aged woman sat down, had the waiter take her order, then produced a bottle of spray-and-wipe and cloth from her handbag and proceeded to clean the surface of her small table in preparation for the coffee and cake she had ordered! Now there is a quirky character trait I am hording and one I'm sure I couldn't have come up with via a journal.
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HOWARD DREW from TENNESSEE said:
I write real experiences! What, why, where, when and who are all inclusive in my journals. I have learned over time, this way of writing is the best way to learn about myself. I LOVE reading my own journals and I often learn how my environment influences me or how I influence my environment.




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