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I just finished the first draft of my first short story, but I don't feel like revising it. Does this mean I'm not cut out to be a writer?

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By Brandi Reissenweber
Published: March 8, 2012
Brandi Reissenweber
Brandi Reissenweber
Q: I recently finished the first draft my first short story. I’ve never gotten to the end of a story, so I’m excited. But I just don’t have it in me to start revising. It’s enough to just finish the thing. I worry this means I might not be cut out to be a writer. What do you think?

A:
To start, enjoy this first! Too often, writers let future work and goals get in the way of celebrating what are very real accomplishments. Let yourself have a moment to focus on what you have done before turning your attention to what you need to do.

Now, on to your concern. It sounds like you’ve tried to write complete stories in the past. That you’ve persevered and achieved this goal is significant. You couldn’t do it before and this time you did. You’re developing as a writer. Just because you don’t want to sink right back into that story and take it apart doesn’t mean you’re not cut out for writing. It just means you’re not ready to revise this particular story at this particular moment.

Give yourself some time. Perhaps you simply need to let this story simmer. Start another. Immerse yourself in a new set of characters, settings and conflict. Not sure what to write next? Work on journaling or writing exercises. Keep returning to the page over and over until an intriguing new character or conflict surfaces. Eventually, you may find yourself eager to return to the other story.

Some writers even get to a point where they feel flattened by the very practice of writing. If that’s how you feel, step away from the page for a bit. Take some time to focus on other interests and activities. Go out into the world and get in the way of inspiration. Set a date to return to the page. You may find you feel quite different about writing when you do.

That story you completed? You may be inspired to return to it down the line and continue working on it. Or you may be done with it, even if the story still needs work. That’s okay. The process of writing is one of learning. That story may have been a practice story that allowed you to explore technique and witness that you’re capable of writing a story with a beginning, middle and end. It’s not a polished final draft, but you’ve still done important work in your development as a writer. Either way, keep your sights on the next story.

I paraphrase the Greek philosopher Heraclitus: You cannot step into the same river twice. The river flows and changes. People, too, are not static. This strikes me as apt for the writing process. Don’t fall into the habit of taking a specific situation with one story and applying it to your potential success as a writer. The dynamic will change every time you return to the page. See what you find there with this fresh perspective.
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Brandi Reissenweber teaches fiction writing and reading fiction at Gotham Writers' Workshop and authored the chapter on characterization in Gotham's Writing Fiction: The Practical Guide. Her work has been published in numerous journals, including Phoebe, North Dakota Quarterly and Rattapallax. She was a James C. McCreight Fiction Fellow at the Wisconsin Institute for Creative Writing and has taught fiction at New York University, University of Wisconsin and University of Chicago. Currently, she is a visiting professor at Illinois Wesleyan University.

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HEATHER HAMILTON from CANADA said:
Congratulations! Enjoy your moment. And don't be discouraged if you don't feel like an immediate edit. Odds are that if you come back to this story later, you may very well have a new perspective on it. If you're like most writers, you become very immersed in your story. With some distance (time), it becomes easier to see spots that need tightening up, or areas that could use improvement. And if for some reason you never get back to the story, it still counts as part of the overall body of work that helped you to move forward and develop as a writer.
PETER SCHWARZ from MINNESOTA said:
VERY generous advise (oh patience, where art thou?) by both, Brandi and James .
MARGUERITE ZANGRILLO from NEW YORK said:
Perfection is an elusive goal and you may never be fully satisfied with your stories. I'm sure even published authors have had second thoughts about the stories they wrote.and got published.
Consider the story you worked on as the best you could do today. Tomorrow you will write a better story. Your writing skills will improve with practice. Read books on how to develop a plot, bring life to a character, and other wonderful books on writing techniques. When reading books in the same genre as yours put a post-in on the page where you found an interesting phrase or description. Not to copy it, but to inspire you to write it in your own style.
Write on!
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JAMES LEWIS from CANADA said:
No one has the right to tell another person, especially a beginner, they should not write. Only time will tell. The fact that you actually finished a story bodes well, I think. I agree with everything that Brandi said here, and I would add this: A writer has to learn to take criticism. Give yourself some time to bask in your accomplishment, but at some point, when you are ready, you should join a writers group and show your story. Try not to be defensive or angry when people start saying your baby may be imperfect or have a few warts. And if more than three people have the same criticism of your story -- listen to them! It takes time to grow as a writer. Read a lot. Write a lot. Think a lot. And submit a lot. From one writer to another, I wish you the best of luck.
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