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Resolve to write better and smarter

3 strategies to help you meet your writing goals with confidence

By Brandi-Ann Uyemura
Published: December 21, 2011
Brandi-Ann Uyemura
Brandi-Ann Uyemura
As you reflect on the upcoming new year, what is the one thing you want more than anything? Perhaps you create a list of writing resolutions every year and seldom commit to it. If so, don’t worry. With the right tools and advice, 2012 could be the year you begin a gradual transformation from the writer you are now to the writer you want to be. You have another 365 days. How will you spend them? Like the pebble in the stream, one small shift can change everything.

No matter what your specific writing goals are, these three strategies will help you meet them with a confident spirit:

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Let go of your ego. If I had written this article in college, I might have titled it “Write longer and harder.” I had an unhealthy attachment to my writing. As a beginning writer, I felt exposed. Getting any feedback that was less than positive felt like a personal hit to my ego. As a result, my writing suffered. The most common complaint from my English professors was that my essays were too wordy.

Over time, I learned that when you hold on to unnecessary details, you risk losing your readers. Think carefully about the words you choose. Keep them because they are important to your article or story, not because it will hurt your ego to delete them.

“Learn to be merciless with your own work,” advises I.J. Schecter, a freelance writer in Toronto. “Editing yourself is hard, but the sooner you become willing to do it, the faster you’ll improve. … Not everything you write is going to see the light of day, but the stuff that doesn’t get read by others isn’t wasted writing—it represents practice and evolution. Every word you write improves the next one.”

Listen to your inner critic. As a writer with more than a dozen versions of a single essay, I know firsthand what can go wrong when you stop listening to yourself and start trying to please others. You lose your way, and your narrative veers off course. “Ultimately, the best judge of the quality of your work is that little voice in your head that sometimes whispers, ‘It isn’t there yet.’ Listen to that voice,” Schecter says.

Go with the flow. If you lack confidence, you may follow someone else’s system of writing—one that doesn’t feel right to you. “Sometimes we can get too attached to writing in a straight line, chronologically, the very next scene,” says Jordan Rosenfeld, a San Francisco-area fiction writer and freelancer. “I learned that by freeing myself up to write any scene at any place in my fiction that was calling me, I’d finish drafts sooner and enjoy my writing practice more.”

In Less: Accomplishing More by Doing Less, Marc Lesser uses the analogy of river rafting to demonstrate the importance of going with the flow. He says that oftentimes it is tempting to work harder instead of stopping to change directions. “Though it’s counterintuitive, the most productive and safest action to take ... is to relax and let the current take you,” he suggests.

When I was just starting out, for example, I was excited about my first assignment for a magazine, but I felt insecure and lacked editorial direction. To remedy the situation, I imitated the style of other writers. The extra time and energy I spent writing in a way that didn’t feel natural to me ended up costing me a published assignment.

Writing better and smarter isn’t about working harder or following a rigid set of rules for how you should write. Follow your own natural course, listen to your voice, and go with what feels best. Then you will exceed your writing expectations in 2012.
Brandi-Ann Uyemura is an associate editor for Psych Central and a freelance copywriter, blogger and features writer.
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SUSAN MODREGON from UTAH said:
1st thanks for responding to all the comments, and so long after. Other sites I've been on the writers have been ignoring their comments.
I've actually already been using a lot of the tips you gave. But its always good to hear from a paid pro that you're doing something right. I can tend to GO ON too. I'm better now at keeping my characters from monologing.

I don't think I've ever been adverse to editing and cutting, but I know I became even more willing to cut since seeing the bonus features to Disney's "The Incredibles". They cut a perfectly good intro to that movie. Written, animated, acting, everything good. Then the writers wrote the law suits intro. BETTER! Before that I thought you should only cut bad parts. And its hard for our ego to call much bad. But here I found that I should be just as willing to cut good writing. And like the clay peice that got wrecked in the kilm, the new one can come out better than the first.

But being willing, is not nearly as hard as knowing what to edit. One thing hard about being wordy is I got attached to adjectives. I learned from Robert McKee's book "Story" that description can be in the verb. Instead of "walk" use hobble, saunter, glide,etc... But it's hard to refrain from "smooth silky glide". Its not needed, but we think it sounds brilliant or poetic with longer combos and we want to be original. One word can seem so plain.

Going with the current does work. I've started from the ending in some stories. But I've found myself altering one part half a dozen times rather than filling some of the holes to finish a complete first draft. Perfectionists may have to push to move on. My biggest challenge now is getting the story structure right. Instict can take you part ways, but we can trail off. Blake Snyder's Save the Cat books have taught me a lot and made me see my errors. And I think I'm less intimidated with the prospect of trying to sell my work than I was. What advice would you give in regard to queries?
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KRISHNA PANIKKER from MALAYSIA said:
Happy New Year dear.You are God send gift.It was me you were writing about .I am egostic (please tell me about ego) and all the rest you have mentioned.I have been writing for along time. It has been hobby and pastime since I was a eight year old girl(i'm 55!!)It was my Irish nun English teacher who actually encouraged me to write. God bless Sister Eugene.Iam definitely going to take your advice and make good use of it for the 365 days. Happy New Year and God bless you. Krishna Malaysia
BRANDI ANN C UYEMURA from CALIFORNIA said:
@Mateeka, Thanks! I think what you're feeling is normal. Maybe for your fiction work, you're more tentative to reveal it because it is more personal to you. At least that's been my experience. Over time, when you're ready, you may then feel open to letting other eyes read it. Good luck and thanks for your comment!

@Kate, First of all, congratulations on not only submitting your manuscript, but also for getting positive feedback about your work! How exciting! Secondly, I think we're all works-in-progress and sometimes it takes a few tries before we remember that we need to listen more to ourselves. This is something I have to learn over and over again so you're definitely not alone in this.
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KATE WORTH from VIRGINIA said:
Excellent advice! Just received feedback from an agent on a manuscript I submitted weeks ago. She said she liked my writing and the project, but detailed a number of changes she felt would be needed before it was ready for market. The funny thing is, I agreed with all of them and had thought about making most at one time or another. As you said... I ignored my inner critic to my detriment. The part about unnecessary details is also apt; I strayed from the core story and it bogged things down.
BRANDI ANN C UYEMURA from CALIFORNIA said:
@Patricia, That's so nice to hear! Happy New Year to you too!!

@Raul, Glad it helped. And hope it helps your writer friends too. Thanks too for the generous 5 stars. =)
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