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Collaborating can open your brand and your mind (Part 1 of 2)

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By Kay B. Day
Published: July 5, 2011
Kay B. Day 2010
Kay B. Day
When I first began to freelance, I shunned all thoughts of sharing a byline. In fact, I shunned thoughts of collaborating in general. Write long enough and you’ll learn to never say never.

A couple weeks ago a package arrived. When I opened it I found a mystery novel written by a friend. The cover art immediately grabbed my attention, but that wasn’t why I began to thumb eagerly through the pages. My poem was part of the novel Matanzas Bay, and I wanted to see how Victor DiGenti (writing as Parker Francis) worked it into the storyline.

I wasn’t disappointed—as a matter of fact, I learned something.

DiGenti didn’t start out by placing the complete poem on a page. He worked various parts of it into different scenes and actions involving the main characters, one of whom was expertly drawn as an academic poet whose ego was as full as the body of his work.

I told DiGenti I thought he worked the poem in seamlessly.
Victor DiGenti
Victor DiGenti
“Your poem perfectly captured the dark mood I was striving for in Matanzas Bay,” he said, “particularly for my character, the former [fictional] Florida poet laureate, Clayton Ford Henderson.”

DiGenti said he had written about one-third of the novel, first in a series featuring the main character Quint Mitchell, when he asked me to write a poem tailored to the book. I knew DiGenti well, through numerous book festivals and a publisher who had brought out our books. That was important—you have to be assured whomever you’re collaborating with on any level is a writer whose brand will complement your own.

“As I recall, I sent you excerpts describing the character and you crafted two wonderful stanzas. I particularly liked the last line of the first stanza, 'Hope drifted away like ashes.' After receiving ‘A Flash of Silence,’ I worked it into the storyline, using parts of it to either help define the character or to accentuate the action being depicted,” DiGenti told me.

Our collaboration was a simple process, but I learned a great deal in hindsight. For one thing, I was familiar with the geographical setting of the mystery, in St. Augustine. I realized every detail about the poet and the other characters as well as the props and well-known historic sites had to ring true.

“Even fiction is based on reality,” DiGenti said, “and the author needs to be certain of his/her facts, including street names, weather conditions, police procedures and so much more. If you get something wrong, and I’m sure I did, rest assured a reader will call you on it.” The novelist said he also researched various time periods in history in-depth.

When DiGenti asked me to write the poem, I knew it would take place in Florida and he’d provided details about the poet’s personality. That was helpful; after all, I’ve met and/or interviewed many famous male poets and the one thing I knew they all had in common was a conflict of ego and frailty. Once I read Matanzas Bay, I viewed the plot in reverse sequence and considered the poem I’d written. It was fairly astonishing how well they meshed. There was a natural quality to it; I think if we’d over-analyzed it to begin with, the poem wouldn’t have fit as well.
Matanzas Bay cover
My small contribution to Matanzas Bay was a mini-collaboration—very time-friendly yet challenging in the sense that I wanted to get the tone and voice of the poem correct. Once I finished reading the novel, I not only admired DiGenti’s writing, I took pleasure in seeing my work become part of his story.

With that in mind, I’ve been collaborating on a more complex project, a nonfiction work. I’ve already come to realize a few things. Collaborating definitely opens your brand—my poem will be seen by lovers of mystery novels and those readers might not be inclined to pick up a book of poems or perhaps even to read poems.

I also learned about some new author-friendly websites that DiGenti said “helped get the word out.” He said he used Goodreads.com and BookTour.com as part of his marketing efforts. DiGenti has taken a reverse approach overall, saying social media is “time-consuming,” so he’s adhering to “the old-fashioned kind of marketing” and that enables him to concentrate on his writing.

The biggest plus of my exchange with DiGenti came as an education of sorts—analyzing how he fit a simple two stanza poem into the plot and character of a novel and seeing how they all work together as a unit. I realized I liked collaborating, a complete reverse of my youthful mindset, and reaffirmation of the golden rule of writing and life. Never say never.
Related Links

Matanzas Bay—Murder in the Nation’s Oldest City
  http://www.parkerfrancis.com
  Website for Parker Francis (pen name for Victor DiGenti)

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Join us next time for Part II as we journey into a deeper, more complex type of collaboration and share tips on what we’ve learned.
Florida journalist Kay B. Day has won awards for poetry, nonfiction and fiction. The author of two books, she has written for The Christian Science Monitor, United Press International, The Florida Times-Union and Sky News. To learn more about Kay Day, see www.kayday.com. To read Kay's other Web Savvy columns about writing for the Web, click here.
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KAY DAY from FLORIDA said:
Brenda, thanks so much for sharing that. I have certainly learned the value of that process! best, KBD
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BRENDA WILLIAMS from MONTANA said:
I think writers sometimes shy away from collaboration because we are too attached to our writing to consider sharing the creative process with others. A healthy detachment from writing opens many doors, not only collaborative doors, but creative doors. If we look at writing as something that we truly don't own, but rather as something that flows through us out into the world, we may be less afraid to try new things, take risks, and collaborate with others. I agree that collaboration can open our minds and our brands.
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