The query letter

Dear ________:

I am currently seeking representation for Dramani, my popular fiction novel of 76,000 words aimed at the general market.

Twenty-five years ago a space ship crashed into the Mojave Desert. The only survivors of that crash were the 70 young children of a human-like alien species who were soon identified as Dramani. Although their existence was kept secret by a rich oil tycoon who knew public knowledge would threaten the safety and happiness of his beloved alien children, it was only a matter of time before the Dramani children grew up and became aware of their non-human attributes. This happens to Sarah Winters on her 25th birthday when she communicates telepathically with Darren McAvoy, another Dramani unaware of his origin. Stunned by their newfound ability, and by Darren’s ocean-blue eyes, Sarah starts a quest for truth that leads her to a fight for her identity, the lives of those she loves, and the survival of her species. 

Fast-paced, suspenseful and sprinkled with romance, Dramani demonstrates that knowing the facts of your origin is not as important as what you choose to do with them, and that humanity is a universal concept.

I will be happy to provide a full manuscript upon your request. Thank you for your time and patience. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
 
Sincerely,

[Name withheld]