Ask The Writer: Is it alright to use multiple question marks?

We answer a reader's question about the best way to show that a character is confused.

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Can I use several question marks when a character is confused? Or can I overlay a question mark and an exclamation mark when a character shouts a question?

As a general rule of thumb, try to choose one end punctuation mark for a sentence. A string of question marks won’t capture your character’s confusion as well as a carefully chosen gesture, action or line of dialogue.

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 That combination of a question mark and an exclamation mark is called an interrobang (or interabang) and it is actually a question mark superimposed on an exclamation mark. It can be used when a question is exclaimed. But before you put it to use, consider this: Is a punctuation mark really the most effective way to communicate the character’s emotion? More often than not, you’ll serve your fiction best by choosing the exclamation point or the question mark. And you’ll accomplish even more if you focus on description, action or gesture to reveal the nuances of the character’s experience.

Also, consider the connotations that come with multiple punctuation marks at the end of a sentence and how well those interact with your intentions. Some put the interrobang in the same category as the emoticon. Are you looking for that feel in your narrative?  

 

—Brandi Reissenweber teaches fiction writing and reading fiction at Gotham Writers Workshop.